Friday 3 October 2014

We're going on a bear hunt... the alternative version!

This afternoon we wrote an alternative story of We're Going on a Bear Hunt. We chose different places to visit in the story and for each one thought of two adjectives to describe it, such as "thick, oozy" which is used to describe the mud in the story. Then we decided on the action and sound we would make as we travelled through that place. We practised the story, then worked in groups to make cards to prompt us in our storytelling. Each group had one place to make a picture of. We thought about which materials to use, how to make the picture and what we needed to write. Then we practised telling our story again before performing it for Mrs Comer!

Here is our version of the story:

We're Going on a Bear Hunt
by Reception

We're going on a bear hunt.
We're going to catch a big one.
What a beautiful day!
We're not scared.

Uh-uh! A beach!
A sandy, shelly beach.
We can't go over it.
We can't go under it.
Oh no!
We've got to go through it!

Step hop jump!
Step hop jump!
Step hop jump!

We're going on a bear hunt.
We're going to catch a big one.
What a beautiful day!
We're not scared.

Uh-uh! The sea!
The wet, blue sea.
We can't go over it.
We can't go under it.
Oh no!
We've got to go through it!

Swim swim swim!
Swim swim swim!
Swim swim swim!

We're going on a bear hunt.
We're going to catch a big one.
What a beautiful day!
We're not scared.

Uh-uh! A desert!
A hot, dry desert.
We can't go over it.
We can't go under it.
Oh no!
We've got to go through it!

Need some water!
Need some water!
Need some water!

We're going on a bear hunt.
We're going to catch a big one.
What a beautiful day!
We're not scared.

Uh-uh! Mountains!
Big, snowy mountains.
We can't go over them.
We can't go under them.
Oh no!
We've got to go through them!

Slip and slide!
Slip and slide!
Slip and slide!

We're going on a bear hunt.
We're going to catch a big one.
What a beautiful day!
We're not scared.

Uh-uh! A cave!
A narrow, gloomy cave.
We can't go over it.
We can't go under it.
Oh no!
We've got to go through it!

Tiptoe! Tiptoe! Tiptoe!

WHAT'S THAT?

One shiny wet nose!
Two big furry ears!
Two big goggly eyes!
IT'S A BEAR!!!!

Quick! Back through the cave! Tiptoe! Tiptoe! Tiptoe!
Back through the mountains! Slip and slide! Slip and slide!
Back through the desert! Need some water! Need some water!
Back through the sea! Swim swim swim! Swim swim swim!
Back through the beach! Step hop jump! Step hop jump!

Get to our front door.
Open the door.
Up the stairs.
Oh no!
We forgot to shut the door.
Back downstairs.
Shut the door.
Back upstairs.
Into the bedroom.
Into bed.
Under the covers.

We're not going on a bear hunt again.







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