Friday 7 February 2014

Fabulous Writing

This afternoon we have been making up stories about some of the characters we dressed up as today. We talked about introducing the characters in the first sentence, having something exciting happen in the second sentence and then finishing the story in the last sentence (the conclusion). We also added a fourth sentence to our story to make it sound like a proper fairy tale! Here is the story we wrote altogether:

Once upon a time there was a beautiful and kind princess called Rosie. One day a fierce fire-breathing dragon took the princess and locked her in a tall tower. A brave knight fought the dragon and rescued the princess. They lived happily ever after!

Then we all had some time to try writing stories of our own. We looked at each other's work on the board using our new visualiser and talked about how we could make our stories better.

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